[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề Writing ngày 17/09/2022 

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Task 1

The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012.

đề Writing ngày 17/09/2022 task 1

The pie charts given indicate the recruitment data and the percentage of both full-time and part-time jobs held by each gender in the UK between 1988 and 2012.

Overall, there was not just a substantial increase in numbers but also a variety of mild modifications within areas of particular statistics.

As can be seen from the graphs, the percentage of males who work full-time has consistently been around 50%, with the exception of a small decline from 53% to 47%. In contrast, a group of men who work part-time jobs received the lowest ranking in both years, coming in at just 1,550 and 2,131, respectively, or under 10% of the poll participants overall.

Concurrently, there were opposing conditions in female employment, with full-time and part-time orientations. The total number of full-time female employees increased significantly from 4,482 to 7,696, more than doubling, whereas the total number of women working part-time was considered to have decreased marginally.

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Task 2

In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

People frequently choose to shop at larger stores outside of cities over smaller ones in the middle of towns in many different countries. Consequently, there are more cars on the road. Although this tendency has a variety of benefits, in my opinion the drawbacks outweigh them by a wide margin. This essay would attempt to analyse the given situation before drawing on a rational conclusion. 

On the one hand, it is true that some characteristics of the enormous out-of-town stores’ appeal may be advantageous. In the first place, there is no question that these larger businesses may have lower operational costs when they are constructed outside of the city, therefore this results in more reasonable prices for customers who purchase commodities there. Secondly, this can strengthen the local economy and help to relieve urban overcrowding. More city people will be encouraged to move to these areas as the lifestyles there grow more streamlined and convenient owing to the services—such as stores—that are offered there.

On the other hand, I am adamant that shopping at major retailers in the suburbs has more disadvantages than advantages. To be more precise, it should be expensive to refill cars and require a significant amount of time to get to the outskirts, which creates some unanticipated problems and wears people out once they reach these stores. Long distance travel can also produce a sizable amount of greenhouse emissions. In other words, by expanding their carbon footprint, stores moving to outlying areas exacerbate environmental issues, particularly air pollution.

In conclusion, despite the benefits of allowing customers to get lower rates and growing the economy in the periphery, I absolutely believe that the negatives, such as threats to environmental concerns and a waste of time and money for gasoline, outweigh the benefits.

  • Appeal (n): sự hấp dẫn
  • Operational cost (n): chi phí vận hành
  • Commodities (n): hàng hóa dùng hàng ngày
  • Streamline (n): bình thường, chính thống
  • Exacerbate (v): tăng lên
  • Periphery (n): 1 khu vực nào đó

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