[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề Writing ngày 07/07/2022

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07.09.2022

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Task 1

The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans 

Giải đề writing ngày 07/07/2022

The processing of cocoa beans to produce various products is shown in the flow chart. 

Overall, from the beginning with whole beans to the finished goods on the market, it is obvious that the process is divided into three steps.

Firstly, whole beans are plucked from the cocoa tree in the initial stage. Their outer shells are removed after picking, and they are then dried for the following step. Subsequently, there are several stages in stage 2. The dry beans are then crushed to produce cocoa liquor. While the result is refined to create industrial chocolate that is sweetened with sugar and added with cocoa, some of these crushed beans are further pressed to create cocoa cake.

The third and final step involves grinding the cocoa cake to create cocoa powder and other side products. Whilst cocoa is used in the production of beverages and desserts, cocoa powder is sold on the market for consumer consumption. Also, consumers eventually consume the completed chocolate goods after the industrial chocolate has undergone final processing.

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Task 2

Nowadays people depend on technology in their free time. Is this a positive or negative development?

With the advancement of technology, many individuals now spend much of their free time in front of screens rather than engaging in outside activities. During the course of this essay, I would elaborate both the positive and negative impacts of such a phenomenon before drawing a rational conclusion. 

Obviously, using technology to enjoy people’s leisure time seems to have numerous advantages. To begin with, the availability of technology entertainment continues to be the key driver of increased interest in them. Simply said, thanks to technological advancements, recreational material is now available not just on computers but also on mobile phones and smart TVs. In addition, young people have recently developed workaholism, which leaves them with little time for other pursuits. As a result, adults now spend their leisure time playing video games, for instance, on their computers or laptops which can be considered as time and effort-saving activities. 

Nevertheless, spending too much time on these activities brings about many consequences to users both mentally and physically. Regarding the former point, most individuals were more likely to spend their time interacting, communicating, and being further productive before games and other forms of virtual entertainment ruined their lifestyles with persistent habits. Furthermore, staring at the screen for hours can cause eye irritation, energy drain, memory impairment, and focus ability. Last but not least, since people are unable to spend much time with their family, it would fail to close the distance between family members.

To conclude, most adults are definitely in favour of using technology to entertain and enjoy adventurous experiences these days. However, it should be considered a negative development as drawbacks would surely outweigh the benefits if people are addicted to such virtual forms of recreation.

  • Elaborate (v): phân tích rõ ràng
  • A key driver (n): yếu tố quyết định
  • Workaholism (n): sự “nghiện” công việc
  • Memory impairment (n): suy giảm trí nhớ

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