Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1, 2: School spending

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04.04.2022

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Task 1

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. 
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Sample

The graphs illustrate variations in the proportions of five major categories that formed a British school’s annual costs between 1981 and 2001.

Overall, although the shares of three goods increased, the percentages of the other two diminished. Furthermore, throughout the survey, academic staff wages accounted for the largest share of spending, while insurance represented for the smallest.

In 1981, wages given to teachers accounted for the largest share of spending (40 percent), and they increased by a fourth before dropping marginally. Non-academic staff wages, on the other hand, were for less than a third of total costs in 1981, although their percentage decreased significantly by 13% throughout the given two decades.

Furniture and equipment had a similar percentage of the market as educational resources (15%) initially, but while the former fell by two-thirds before rising fivefold, the latter saw a sharp spike before halving to just under 10%.

Last but not least, by 1991, the insurance payment had climbed from 2% initially to 3% before nearly tripling in 2001.

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Task 2

The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 

Sample

Some argue that more governmental funding should be allocated to science-based disciplines rather than other fields, since this would help the country progress significantly. Throughout this essay, I would objectively examine this viewpoint before reaching a rational conclusion.

Obviously, there are a variety of reasons why governments should invest heavily in research. Initially, providing comprehensive information and specific abilities in science necessitates a large amount of high-tech equipment, state-of-the-art facilities, and infrastructure, all of which are prohibitively expensive. Furthermore, because science is progressing at a rapid rate, authorities must invest in upgrading newly-established and expensive technologies. Furthermore, since science is considered a fundamental topic, it is necessary for government authorities to invite highly skilled and prominent professionals in the field of science who demand premium monthly salaries.

The given viewpoint, nevertheless, is not without criticism. To begin with, science should not receive more funding than other areas because social issues and the economic sector are equally important. In reality, social studies provide people a well-rounded perspective on all elements of life, helping them to successfully deal with a variety of everyday situations. Furthermore, the state would achieve significant gains by pouring large sums into the corporate sector. This is due to the fact that commercial operations create significant income, which may then be utilized to solve other pressing issues, therefore assisting national social and economic growth.

To summarize, while science should receive money, social topics and business also require significant investments in order for a country to attain outstanding achievement.

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Vocab

  • Discipline (n): ngành học
  • Necessitate (v): đòi hỏi 
  • Prohibitively expensive (adj): vô cùng tốn kém
  • The corporate sector (n): mảng doanh nghiệp
  • Social and economic growth (n): sự phát triển kinh tế xã hội
  • Attain achievement (v): đạt được thành quả

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