[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề Writing ngày 11/08/2022

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Task 1

The diagrams show the sales of cars of 3 different brands between 2015 – 2019.

[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề Writing ngày 11/08/2022

The given line graph illustrates the quantities of cars sold in a five-year period from 2015 to 2019, regarding three brands: Xbrand, Ybrand, and Zbrand. Meanwhile, the second pie chart represents five different categories of cars purchased within the same period. 

Overall, it could be seen that each brand in the line graph followed different trends, with Xbrand dominating the data toward the end of the period. Besides, MPV, SUV, and hatchback City Car were the most selected categories. 

Regarding the line graph, Zbrand had the highest position initially, at over 3 million cars sold. However, the figure dropped continuously, being surpassed by Ybrand in 2016 and Xbrand in 2015, hitting the low of under 2 million in the same year. Toward the end of the chart, this data recovered to the second position, at around 2.5 million. For Ybrand, it started at the middle palace, at under 2 millions cars sold, reaching the peak at nearly 3 million in 2017 before returning to the original figure in  the last year. Last but not least, the most impressive development belonged to X brand, being from the lowest position at under 1 million to the peak at 3 million in 2019, being the most popular brand in  the final year. 

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When examining the pie chart, it can be observed that an MPV, which made up over a third of sales, was chosen by most people who bought cars. The second most popular vehicles were a hatchback city car and an SUV, which combined accounted for more than half of all sales. Less than 15% of sales were made up of sedans and sports vehicles combined.

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Task 2

Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals hold that having good plans is what makes someone successful, while others contend that other factors, such as perseverance and luck, are more important. During the course of the essay, both perspectives would be subjected to careful consideration before drawing on a rational conclusion.

On the one hand, proponents contend that successful planning is the key to success. The primary advantage is that they help individuals accomplish their objectives. This is due to the fact that they would map out specific measures to take in order to accomplish particular goals before gaining a broader perspective on the process. In other words, plans serve as a reminder to people to exert greater effort and continue in their attempts. Furthermore, planning enables people to make timely modifications should circumstances arise. More precisely, they are able to anticipate events, making them more likely to reduce risks and seize opportunities to advance in their careers.

Opponents, on the other hand, believe that other factors are essential for success in many areas of life. The most important one is being diligent. People who possess this trait are more likely to focus on their job and persevere in following their passions, which increases their chances of finding success on their own. Being fortunate to have favourable opportunities to grow is another factor. The examples could be observed left and right in the entertainment industry, where talents need to be lucky enough to get spotted by producers and directors out of a plethora of mediocre opportunity-seekers. 

In conclusion, there are virtues on both sides of the debate. However, in my opinion, the planning stage should be viewed as the most vital one, as this could be wholefully controlled by individuals, dissimilar to the other external factors. 

  • Contend (v): giữ quan điểm
  • Perseverance (n): sự kiên định
  • To exert effort (v): thể hiện nỗ lực
  • Seize opportunities (v): nắm bắt cơ hội
  • Diligent (adj): chăm chỉ, có mục tiêu rõ ràng
  • Fortunate (adj): vận may

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