SAMPLE ESSAY ĐỀ IELTS WRITING TASK 1 NGÀY 28/10/2017

Đề IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Essay ngày 28/10/2017

Task 1: The pie charts below show information about where coffee is produced, consumed & where its profit goes

Chart analysis:
▪Đây là dạng đề pie charts (về tình hình sản xuất cà phê, tiêu thụ cà phê & lợi nhuận thu được)
▪Có 3 pie charts: 1 chart for the production of coffee; 1 chart for the consumption of coffee; 1 chart for its profit distribution
▪Nhìn chung: South America sản xuất nhiều nhất; Europe tiêu thụ nhiều nhất; shippers hưởng lợi nhiều nhất
▪Cụ thể:
Về sản xuất: South America dẫn đầu (44%); 4 khu vực kia thấp hơn nhiều & thấp nhất là Oceania (2%)
Về tiêu thụ: dẫn đầu là Europe (55%) & other regions/countries (27%); North America & Japan thấp hơn nhiều
Note: Đề chỉ ghi "other" nhưng khi viết phải diễn giải thành "other regions/countries" mới phù hợp với pie chart này.
Về phân phối lợi nhuận: lợi nhuận chủ yếu vào túi shippers & sellers (tổng cộng là 80%); explorers & producers hưởng lợi rất ít (tổng cộng 20%)


Sample answer:
The provided pie charts illustrate the production and consumption of coffee as well as the distribution of the profit concerned. Overall, South America is the most productive region, Europe is the greatest consumer, and shippers enjoy the highest amount of financial return.
Firstly, in terms of production figures, South America is the highest (44%), followed by Africa, Asia and Central America (19%, 18% and 17% respectively), leaving Oceania far behind (2%). As for consumption, the top two proportions are associated with Europe (55%) and other regions/countries (27%) whereas those of North America (11%) and Japan (7%) are much lower. Interestingly, Europe and North America do not produce coffee but their consumption is significant.
When it comes to profit earners, explorers and producers gain only 10% each while shippers and sellers are the greatest beneficiaries (55% and 25% in the same order). Again, those who sell and ship coffee products are not involved in the production process, but together they earn 80% of the total profit.

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