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Task 1
| The bar charts below provide information about percentages of students who are proficient in a foreign language in different countries. |
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Sample
The bar graph depicts the proportion of male and female students in six nations who have a good command of a foreign language.
Overall, it could be observed that female students are clearly more skilled in a second language than male students, with the proportion of such fluent students being comparatively higher in India and Romania.
As seen in the diagram, India has the largest proportion of learners fluent in a foreign language, with around 68 percent female students and over a half of male students being able to communicate in a second language. In Romania, around 65 percent of female students and little over 40 percent of male students are multilingual.
Interestingly, in all nations except Thailand where the male-to-female ratio is 30 percent, the rate of students with foreign language skills is greater among girls than boys. Subsequently, Vietnam has a higher proportion of pupils who know a second language than China and Russia. Last but not least, China has the lowest rate of such students, with only 20-30% of students knowing a second dialect.
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Vocab
- Have a good command of (v): nắm vững 1 kỹ năng
- Multilingual (adj): có thể sử dụng nhiều ngôn ngữ
- Dialect (n): ngôn ngữ phụ, ngôn ngữ không chính thức
Task 2
| Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
Sample
Many people believe that older people should be permitted to work past the age of retirement. This is, in my opinion, appropriate for a minority of people who are still capable of working, but the majority should pursue other interests.
On the one hand, many senior citizens find fulfillment in their employment. When their mental and physical health has not yet started to decline severely, this is the case on point. Those in technical or artistic fields, such as designers, artists, performers, and poets, are the finest examples of this. These people frequently produce their finest work later in life. Furthermore, elderly adults with less attractive employment may be without a family to spend time with and require the emotional and financial support that a job may provide. Various retired people in many nations feel adrift and without purpose or security since they may not have a job.
Most elderly individuals, on the other hand, struggle to adjust to societal changes and would be better suited to enjoy their retirement. Most employment nowadays demands at least a rudimentary understanding of technology, and elderly persons might be a barrier in such situations. This is bad for the company, but it’s much worse for the older employee, who may feel unwelcome. Instead, elderly adults can devote more time to their families and follow their interests and pastimes if they have the financial resources to do so. Many retirees, for example, might spend time and energy studying hobbies like carpentry and painting, allowing them to express themselves artistically and obtain a new feeling of fulfillment.
Ultimately, the few elderly persons who are still capable of performing high-level jobs should not be prevented from doing so, while the majority of them should retire with dignity. For older generations, this is the most practical solution.
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Vocab
- Fulfillment (n): sự thoả mãn
- Societal change (n): những thay đổi về chất trong xã hội
- Rudimentary (adj): cơ bản, đơn giản
- Dignity (n): nhân phẩm, đạo đức
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